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The sea is rough stirred with tea spoons
Dishes swim in kitchen made dreams,
Crossing the land hooked onto a washing line.
The landscape is dirty linen, clothes and sheets
Being washed, ironed and folded out again and again,
A little rain never hurt no-one.

Words are flames in a cooker
Spread out like a jigsaw table cloth,
Staring into tealeaves and seeds
Creased and scattered into the breeze.

My only friends
Kitchen appliances speak to me,
As I escape dodging around empty seats
Curled around the tip of a fork.

Dishes swim in kitchen made dreams
Crossing the land hooked onto a washing line,
Words are flames.
Kitchen appliances speak to me
A little rain never hurt no-one,
This bleeding heart sneezed out of his nose
His better than anything I can prepare.
:icondrowningbywords:
This is my mothering sunday (mothers day) poem =)
Sincere and heartfelt thanx to my mother and her mother
And lots of thanx to :iconcryingpain:
for letting me use her msn quote as a title
it fitted it so well I thought =) :hug:
and also thanx for helping decide on what preview
image to choose it was a hard choice so thanx :hug:
decided to go with the one you liked best =)

found the preview image on google
but heres a link to where it can be found
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and here's a link to mothers day background research
and some cool facts and info about it and stuff =)
[link]

this poem is not just for mothers day celebrated on this
day in the United Kingdom, Ireland and Nigeria
but also is for all the other mothers days across the world

Mother's Day in various languages

* (al): Dita e Nënës (8 Marsi)
* (ar) : يوم الأمّ (Yaum al-Umm)
* (arm) : Մայրության օր (Mayrutyan or)
* (ber) : tameγra n tyemmat
* (bg) : Ден на Майката
* (bs) : dan majki
* (ch) : 母亲节 or 母親節 (mǔ qīn jié;)
* (hr) : Majčin dan
* (cz) : Den Matek
* (da) : Mors dag
* (nl) : Moederdag
* (de) : Muttertag
* (el) : Γιορτή της Μητέρας
* (et) : Emadepäev
* (dar) : روز مادر (Ruz-e Madar)
* (fi) : Äitienpäivä
* (fr) : (La) Fête des mères
* (he) : (he) יום האם (Yom ha-em)
* (hr) : Majčin dan
* (hu) : (Az) Anyák napja
* (ga) : Lá na Mháithair
* (is) : Mæðradagur
* (id) : Hari Ibu
* (it) : (La) Festa della mamma
* (ja) : 母の日 (Haha no Hi)
* (kor) : 어버이날 (Oboi Nal)
* (lv) : Mātes diena
* (lt) : Motinos diena
* (bm) : Hari Ibu
* (mt) : Jum l-Omm
* (no) : Morsdag
* (per) : روز مادر (Rouz-e Maadar)
* (pl) : Dzień Matki
* (pt) : (O) Dia das Mães
* (ro) : Ziua mamei
* (ru) : День Матери
* (es) : Día de la Madre
* (sk) : Deň matiek
* (sl) : Materinski dan
* (sv) : Mors dag
* (sh) : Liepstacoq Bua
* (ta) : Araw ng mga Ina/Nanay
* (tam) : Annaiyar Dhinam
* (th) : วันแม่
* (tr) : Anneler günü
* (ua) : Свято Матері
* (cy) : Sul y Mamau
* (ma) : Ammamar Dinam
* (ka) : Ammandira Dina
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~Natasek Mar 21, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
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~DrowningByWords Mar 22, 2009  Professional Writer
thanx I appreaciate it a lot
and i'm very happy to be featured =) :hug:
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:iconbaarish:
well crafted analogies mate ;)
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~DrowningByWords May 23, 2007  Professional Writer
aww thanx for the kind comment and for the fave =)
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~Mental-Mishap Apr 23, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
awesomely down!!!
really well written :)
i love the continued kitchen metaphor..
just awesome :love:
i especially love the curled around the tip of a fork image :) :)
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~DrowningByWords Apr 23, 2007  Professional Writer
thanx am pleased that you like this
as it means a lot to me as its for all mothers and my mother =)
am glad you picked up on the imagery too :hug:
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:iconpishum:
This is very beautiful!
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~DrowningByWords Apr 3, 2007  Professional Writer
aww thanx you're too kind =)
:hug: :heart:
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:iconpishum:
you are welcome:hug::wave:
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:icontaho:
I like how the notable lines repeat themselves and cement the image in your mind.
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