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In the remaining twilight that is left,
The earth keeps spinning me away from you.
Seems I know just what to say
Too bring the rain clouds.
Seems I know just what to do
Too feel cold.
Long gone are the days,
When my pain could be kissed away.

This is a dream poem disorientated,
To shy;
Too sad,
Too slow;
Too sick,
Too stupid.
Too shy too pickup a girl,
Too sad too scream.
Too slow too run away,
Too sick too work
And too stupid too interpret silent roars.
This is a dream invaded by an army of nightmares,
It's much to much.

I'm in a state of chaos I can't describe
Thousands of hugs and kisses deep,
I'm in as deep as a divorce.
Deeper still than love and deaths
I'm in as deep as a fight,
Deeper still than a mass grave.
I'm in as deep as all of these wounds put together
And deeper still are my screams.
More and more I sink deeper,
Just like before my world was abused.
Gone are the days when a kiss or a hug could repair my little world,
Never been kissed once like it since.



(c)
Russell David Kearns
2006-05-21
"....I'm in a state of chaos I can't describe...."
This is a poem inspired by relationships, love, family, friendship, child abuse and dreams
It is about myself but can also be related to a lot of people
It is also inspired by my good friend Sophie :icongonejustlikebefore:
I'm not sure if I've written the 'to too's' part of the poem properly but saying that it doesn't matter wether it is right or not Cos I want the poem to feel like its being narrated by a lost child To somebody who is sad and still affected by their lost childhood.
All my Heart & Soul
xoxoxo
Russ


edited 9th of August 2007
mostly punctuation
and added a preview image
a collage by me that can be found here: [link]
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AngelofAngels666 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2007
It's beautiful
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DrowningByWords Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2007  Professional Writer
aww thanx thats kind of you to say and hanx for the fave too =) :hug:
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AngelofAngels666 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2007
anytime :) i like making people happy
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ClaudiaCasanova Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2007
:hug: Beautiful
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DrowningByWords Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2007  Professional Writer
aww thanx =) :glomp: :hug:
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cryingpain Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2007
Oh good poem, I can relate to it. :) :hug:
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DrowningByWords Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2007  Professional Writer
thanx that means a lot to me =) :cuddle:
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Kage-Ichihashi Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2007
You accomplished your goal in wanting to "to feel like its being narrated by a lost child To somebody who is sad and still affected by their lost childhood." You really did. Brilliant work.
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DrowningByWords Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2007  Professional Writer
wow thanx thats means a lot to me cos this one means so much to me =) :hug:
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